Mr Bostock & Mrs Lloyd's Class

Canon Sharples CE Primary School, Wigan

Hi i’m Andrew
I like pies!!!
Do you?
If you do like pies then here is an awesome beginning of a story for you!
the amazing pie by Andrew
“Hey guys lets go to the pie shop,”insisted Bill.”OK!” replied Jim. Quickly the three boys,who are named Bill,Jim and Phil,sprinted down the the street to Steve’s pie shop.They slowly entered the shop.”That pie looks tasty”said Phil.”lets buy one”said they bought the best meat and potato pie they could get!then they went home not knowing about the amazing adventure they were about to have….

information about pie!!!

10 things you should know about pies!!!

by Andrew!


10 Comments to “AMAZING PIE STORY!!!”

  1.   Leila | April 1st, 2015 at 1:09 pm     Reply


  2.   Hasan | April 1st, 2015 at 5:27 pm     Reply


  3.   Taylor | April 2nd, 2015 at 8:05 pm     Reply

    Well done realy good
    Tell me more
    Put more wow words

  4.   Chelsea | April 3rd, 2015 at 2:56 pm     Reply

    Put more VCOP in.

  5.   tjay | April 25th, 2015 at 4:18 pm     Reply

    well done

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